This time I want to discribe my favourite thing. I have this thing since I was in 2nd grade in Senior High School. Actually, I bought it by my sister in
That is my HP. Physicly, it looks quite old than the new one. Some of the keypade are getting blur. When we touch the back, it is so smooth, because it made by stainless steel. Sometimes I get a shock when it connect to computer or PC while I hold it. it’s just a little shock actually. The cover sometimes feels warm even cold, it depens on using. If I’m use it many times and too long, It could feels warm and also make the battery low fast. Unfortunately, the bottom screen there is a small scratch that I’ve made. It was in my pocket then my thigh hit the hard cement tip when I was in “
Whatever it takes, I never sell out my beloved HP. There are many memories on it, so I can’t let it go away. Although I buy a brand new, I’ll still keep this on.
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Hi Bro~~~
First Line on ur 1st Paragraph. .
Did you mean ===> Describe??
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bob, i found some mistakes, but it's okay, i'll tell you later :D
actually it's a good writing hehe keep on writing!
nicccoooooo. . . .^^
"Some of the keypade are getting blur."
keypade? ? ? ? >>>>>KEYPADS? ? ? ?
"The cover sometimes feels warm even cold, it depens on using."
DEPENS or DEPENDS? ? ??
hmmm. . .good writing ;)
hehey...take a look at your last paragraph ndrong..
nice post..^^
aaa poor milan...
nickooo...
"because the price is cheaper"..
it would be better if U wrote "because the price was cheaper"..
dn't forget to comment my post ^_^..
necki...
in par 2 line 6 >>.
It could feel.......
It didn't : It could feels...
because,, Modal + Verb 1..........
hahahaha
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